The argument focuses on improving the highway safety at Prunty County. The decrease in speed limit from 55 miles per hour to 45 miles per hour has not proven effective in reducing the fatalities. Moreover, the drivers are breaking the law by exceeding the speed limit. To see better results, the argument suggests that following the same kind of road improvement project like the Butler County could see a reduction in the number of accidents. At the first glance, the argument seems pretty convincing but a careful scrutiny of the same sheds light on a plethora of flaws underlying the assumptions.
Firstly, the argument posits that imposing a restriction on the speed limit doesn't correspond to the decline in the number of accidents and reports by the highway patrol imply an additional problem, that is drivers are not abiding by the speed limit law. Probably, Prunty County hasn't enforced stringent laws concerning the speed limits due to which the people are ignorant about the consequences of violating the speed limit. If the laws were more strict and implied that surpassing 45 miles per hour would lead to cancellation of the driver's licence, probably the law would have been more effective and the accidents would have reduced.
Secondly, the argument doesn't take into consideration of factors causing the accidents. What if the accidents occurring on all county highways are due to the roads which aren't in a good state? What if the street lights on the roads are not functioning due to which more accidents are occurring during the night? Providing more evidence regarding the accidents and their causes would validate the accuracy of the argument.
Thirdly, the argument directly concludes to implement the project undertaken at Butler County. There is no proof that a road project taken up in one place can prove to be efficient and foolproof in another place. For the road improvement project to be effective in Prunty County, the argument should compare the road conditions and visibility at dangerous intersections at the two places. What if the number of accidents in Prunty County are due to rash drivers and not due to the roads? Will the road improvement project be effective in Prunty County? The only possible way to evaluate if this project will be effective is to compare the County's roads and highways and the number of cars.
Thus, before jumping to conclusions to take remedies to reduce the mishaps on road, one must evaluate the criteria mentioned above. The argument has a lot of inherent flaws and answering the above questions and providing more evidence will consolidate the argument even further.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not exactly. maybe the law is strict already.
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 441 350
No. of Characters: 2163 1500
No. of Different Words: 200 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.583 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.905 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.629 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 160 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.05 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.297 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.56 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...posing a restriction on the speed limit doesnt correspond to the decline in the number...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...peed limit law. Probably, Prunty County hasnt enforced stringent laws concerning the ...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...have reduced. Secondly, the argument doesnt take into consideration of factors caus...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...nty highways are due to the roads which arent in a good state? What if the street lig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 28.8173652695 24% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 55.5748502994 115% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 2260.96107784 98% => OK
No of words: 437.0 441.139720559 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05491990847 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66421902936 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462242562929 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6691724283 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.45 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.85 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.70786347227 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248087023345 0.218282227539 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816178473426 0.0743258471296 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771202383546 0.0701772020484 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132202578237 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851200220928 0.0628817314937 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.