Nowadays, our life is fulling of technology which proves that the society needs to be creative and modern. So, I hold the view that if we had much money to pay for the construction of society, I prefer building up new housing or road development. And my opinions are as follows.
Initially, the old buildings shouldn’t be built up again for the reason that the decline of ancient buildings is inevitable. Even if we rebuild it again，its original charm may be endowed with new meanings, and in the same way, what it brings to us is no longer the feeling of primitive simplicity and archaic, but a new idea which from the ones who rebuild them. And that does not make sense.
However, as we all know, if the money is used to provide new housing or road development, there would be more benefits. If the area can be build up with new buildings ,like a new advertisement, it may attract people’s attention. And with the continuous development of economy, people gradually improve the quality of life and pay more and more attention to the enjoyment of life. So , I think the style and function of new buildings are now meeting people’s demands which not only satisfy our customers, but also improve the level of our society. And that’s just what we need at present.
As a result, It is an indispensable part of the construction of modern society, so I hope that the construction of more new housing or road development will promote the development of our society.
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures This money should be use in new housing and road development To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Organized tour to remote community and other countries is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment? 84
- Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? 61
- In some countries it has been observed that many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending them to school. Do the advantages of children studying at home outweigh the disadvantages? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, i think, as a result, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76061776062 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94681404533 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548262548263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8620216467 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200086061213 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737931509227 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687124472474 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12111994316 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372503079745 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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