Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.
There is no doubt that happiness comes from many factors, such as social life, food, goods, work, and so on. Nowadays, social life and career pay an important rule in happiness of people. Although some people keep saying, “ life is not about working, just enjoy your life,” I believe that my job would affect to my happiness the most.
First of all, in my case, I believe that my performance of my job brings me a confidence, which causes happiness. In the lifecycle, people spend most of their time on working; therefore, mostly, their heads would fulfill with work. Of course, getting accepted and admired from colleagues and boss is one factor that workers feel confident and happy. Give myself for instance. In my adult life, I spend most of my time on working. My job is creating a new idea on a scientific research. Thus, whenever my boss accepts my idea, on that day I would come home with a smiley face.
In addition, I think a job is a source of income that leads other factors of happiness. Since, in general, people have several kinds of need such as food, house, convenient substances, and etc. To achieve the needs, people must have the money that is from working. For example, Japanese people work significantly hard, comparing to other nationalities, because they believe that the main source of their work. Plus, obviously, money they earn to spend on many essential things that the families require and make them happy.
In conclusion, I totally believe that working is the most important thing that affects my life the most because it brings me the confidence and induces other happy factors into my life. nevertheless, it plays a crucial rule in our lives, we still pay attention on managing time of work and time of life perfectly in order to optimize our happiness.
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