Some think that 21st century is providing opportunities for us to make some positive changes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? And what kind of changes will be provided?
Form the begining of twenty first century there were a lot of changes. Some think that these changes provides opportunities for us to make possitive impact to the society or even to the
world, where as others think those changes gives more negative impacts. I think those opportunities provides more possitive changes as long as we used those correctly.
Firstly, the technological advancements in 21st century has improved the medical sector. By using new findings and improvements, new equipment and new methods can be introduced to diagnose illnesses of human beings, which will improve the life expectancy. I think this is one of a biggest possitive change that can be done with opportunities.
Secondly, people can make possitive changes to the transportation sector. With new findings more sophisticated vehicles which provides more safety to its passengers can be introduced. Also, use of solar energy for electric vehicles will reduce the usage of fosile fuel, hence, the air polution can be minimized. A one good example is that, Tesla is manufacturing electric vehicles and home charging systems. Tesla has invented a roofing solution, where it is built with solar panels. So, the people who has electric cars can have their own electric generators, not only to charge their cars, but also, to use the same generated power for house hold.
Finally, the internet and information availability help people to grab more knowledge and know about current affairs. There are two sides, when consider the availability of information. The bad side of it is, that the people's privacy. People should learn to use social media wisely. However, students can make use of the internet for possitive things, such as for their studies or school projects.
In my opinion, 21st century provides us more opportunities to make possitive changes. Nevertheless, we should use those opportunities wisely, otherwise there can be negative impacts as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...t to the society or even to the world, where as others think those changes gives more n...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...life expectancy. I think this is one of a biggest possitive change that can be do...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...mation. The bad side of it is, that the peoples privacy. People should learn to use soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, as for, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28938906752 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8981890193 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556270096463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6374305351 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5789473684 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229751925438 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710336134775 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841139818977 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148549955512 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967445360604 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.