Children over 15 years should be allowed to take their own decision without any interference from Their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
I would not prefer to supporting this idea of making the decision by themselves over 15 years old because of some reasons. But most of the parents faced with that situation, which their children decide to make decisions themselves by their own perspective, and it is hard to pull to them.
The first reason of my thought is the children often don't know some situation's harmful results. Although, they think believing themselves is the right way, instead of following their parents until the see the result of decisions on teenage. For instance, I feel it myself on every step of my life, and now I supposed to take advice from my family.
Secondly, most of the teenagers over 15 is making decisions by their emotional on that situation. Sometimes following emotional thoughts make life better, but in another hand, it is riskier. For example, I decided to go camping with my classmates in middle school while my parents tried to stop me, but my mates drunk and fought between each other. Then I apologize to hang out with them.
As a result, I realized to make decisions with my parents is more influence than make decisions alone because of many cases like I mentioned above. So I would like to stand with the side of children doesn't make decisions themselves without any advice from their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i suppose, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76548672566 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56732130737 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7679438183 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221465492616 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908125401014 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876691166817 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144434541403 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591217743581 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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