It is important that sports and social activities to universities and colleges, but I do not think so taking equal financial support as classes and libraries. Sometimes, universities and colleges take it equally, and I thought about it before as various side.
Firstly, sports and social activities cannot evaluate the academic knowledge. I think that sports and activities are necessary for human's self-development, but in order to, it is not the main point of studying in university or college. People's main purpose have to be the studying academic knowledge and prepare for the qualified universe.
Secondly, the financial support is given by based on the potential of student's knowledge and their income. I think most of the children, who really wanted to study at a university is trying to develop their various knowledge like astronomy, maths, biology and so on, instead of playing basketball with friends in their free time.
The last reason is I think it is unfair to take it equally. For example, I have got two friends, which one is more hardworking than the other one and he usually does not have any free time to play ball. In order to, the other one is caring too much about sports and social activity than working on paper because he feels it is easier than studying. At the end, the second one took more scholarships from the first one, and I felt unfair to the first one.
Finally, I stand on the side with disagreeing with the question mentioned in the topic because of three that three reasons. Furthermore, It was one of the hard question I have ever asked and I thought about it carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80575539568 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72753918519 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532374100719 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6743453157 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170287749665 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657590763749 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926404419735 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10258165684 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810028360531 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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