The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Nowadays, people are working after career and thinking that making friends easily is important ability in this society. However, it is useful for improving their environment, it can not be good way to find happiness. In my opinion, making friendship with a small number of people during long time is important as that for happiness because of many reasons which I will mention below.
First of all, there is nobody to help in hard times despite of that few friend. For instance, In kind of any human life has a lot of problems which faced with exhausted moments. When it comes to them, they often searching help or advise from their heavily important people including friends, family, or might be teachers. Nevertheless, there have got some experiences that searched help from friends and failed, which from made friendship as quickly. So it inferred that they should not be failed, if they did not have unuseful friends.
Secondly, that small number of friends over long period can be fill up your nest, instead of many friends as much. Happiness is measured by the memories which wasted time with fun or attractive moments; but not number of friends. In my personality, I often miss my friends when I was happy or upset for sharing that feelings.
In other hand, the third reason of it is the many new friends might call some danger to you. Even thought, they talked with you as friendly as he/she can, it is not mean he/she is kind person. Additionally, you have to identify personality of that person, because they might try to use you for something.
In conclusion, I would prefer to having a few friends over a long period of time because of reasons which mentioned above. At least, I am recommending all of you that choosing good friends is very important step of success without mattered number of friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
.... In my opinion, making friendship with a small number of people during long time is important as...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'few friends'.
Suggestion: few friends
...y to help in hard times despite of that few friend. For instance, In kind of any human lif...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...ing. In conclusion, I would prefer to having a few friends over a long period of tim...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...fer to having a few friends over a long period of time because of reasons which mentioned abov...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess without mattered number of friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, at least, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78095238095 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54557649415 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3277258974 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.125 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34718829519 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107254776033 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924164656742 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198315808125 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113554623704 0.0645574589148 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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