For a healthy and long-lasting relationship between two people, there must be trust, loyalty, love, and respect for each other. To expect a steady and happy relationship singling out any of them is unimaginable. However, we can't also deny the fact that telling the truth is an important consideration if, not the most important factor. I believe being truthful is a must in any relationship in order to maintain the trust, loyal and respect for the significant other. I will talk more about this in this essay.
Firstly, to maintain a good relationship with someone demands that you are true to yourself and to the person as well and no truth is hidden that might haunt the state of good relationship later in life. One cannot fully trust someone who is always hiding behind the lies. Moreover, telling the truth is very important especially when you want to earn someone's trust. People often take the help of lie in order to gain the trust which is not good when you thrive to maintain a healthy relationship in the long run. For example, I had a friend who lied to me that he would help during the preparation for the final exam just to sell me false hopes and gain my trust which didn't last for long when later he didn't even provide his notes to study. This left a bad impression of him and hence I lost my faith and trust eventually worsening the relationship between us.
Secondly, if you aren't loyal to your partner then the happiness erodes with time. Telling the truth is actually a symbol of being loyal no matter what the situation is. When your partner is cheating and hiding the truth, then you can't expect him/her to be loyal throughout the relationship. This will only hurt you immensely when you find the truth from others or from your partner but, later. To add, I can confirm this from my own personal experience. For instance, my girlfriend wasn't fully true when she said she was only dating me when she was also seeing someone else. When I found out later, this broke my heart and made realize she was telling lies the whole time. As a result, we broke up and our relationship ended on bad terms.
In addition, you can't certainly respect someone who hasn't been telling the truth. And, respect is a very important factor in any relationship. I don't see the point of being in a relationship with a person whom you don't respect. Not telling the truth and disrespecting your partner is harmful to the relationship. If your partner is telling the truth even though he/she has made a mistake that will make you angry for a while but later you forgive them and come to know that he/she evidently respects you and wants to assert a healthy relationship.
To conclude, although telling truth is not the only important factor for a healthy relationship between two people but it certainly is the deciding factor that contributes to other factors like trust, loyalty, and respect as well. Thus, instead of hiding the truth for momentary happiness in the relationship, one should always tell the truth in order to have a healthy and happy relationship in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2654.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 580.0 407.700716846 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57586206897 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51191926754 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43275862069 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 791.1 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1126265025 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.16 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231093720217 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831554272014 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486536688489 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148854191393 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311617775908 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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