The three diagrams below show the development of, and plans for, the coastal zone of Brightsea. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons
The three illustrations show the development of a coastal area of Brightsea chronologically from the past condition, in 1950, to the recent one. It is also added with a blueprint of future design of it.
In 1950, the coast only consisted of a lighthouse and its keeper’s house,a jetty, and a few fisherman’s cottage.
Recently, a hotel has been built next to the lighthouse. It also can be seen that the jetty has been grounded and a new ferry wharf is constructed to replace its function. Built on the east northern side of the area, a café and shop featured the coast. A road also has bee...
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