The purpose of education should be to provide students with a value system, a standard, a set of ideas-not to prepare them for a specific job.
Recently importance of education is increased to great extent. So it requires to understand the intention of education and what make them to be educated. It is general belief that well educated person lends to high paying job but such job are created by person who has acquired good quality of education. If everyone think of job, there will be no job. It should be noted that job is only platform where motive to build better nation is achieved with the help of standard education.
Main purpose of education shall be to eliminate the remidies and shall help student to fight against flaws being faced by society. Education is meant to educate anyone in terms of acquiring ability to find out root cause of the problems of society and address them. Any educated person has ability to change the system, but not person having decent job having that ability. Innovative development leads to lots of opportunities and eventually provides jobs to those who are in need. Such innovation results only from well structured education.
Intention behind education shall be first understood by student itself. Student shall be able to help society in order to build well nation. For an example, scientist uses their ability and knowledge to develop technologies, Economist to strengthen the economy of the country, politician to provide better employment and opportunities. In order to achieve this motive, one needs some platform and job provides such platform. In previous example, scientist, economist and politician are positions those provide opportunities to fulfil the motive to help society.
Likewise in our day to day life, we learn activities to make life easier, education is also kind of learning but at a major scale. It should definately have a purpose of improvement in current system, foreseeing the better future.
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| 2018-08-27 | PriteshAmrelia | 50 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'understanding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: understanding
...creased to great extent. So it requires to understand the intention of education and what mak...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...o fulfil the motive to help society. Likewise in our day to day life, we learn activi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 298.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14765100671 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75788300193 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4801446859 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313822254461 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934712770247 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489723056639 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175859743684 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590261684286 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.