Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
In recent survey it is observed that children not playing games are less smart and consisting of smaller perspective of thinking as compared to those of who play games on regular basis. Though this type of survey mostly consider outdoor games which includes physical activity, it also somehow consider indoor activity requires brainstorming. By doing later part in computer, children are developing their mind and physics rather than just wasting time.
Similarly children can use puzzle games or quiz games in computer to enhance their knowledge. Children often solve riddles in order to hone skills. But action games come into picture which distort childrens development. It is notable that children tend to play games to refresh themselves. If children are get habituate to computer games,, it becomes a problem. Addition of computer games not only distract children from study, it also leads to inept development of children.
Conclusively children should be allowed to play games for limited time in a day which eventually helps them to get refreshed as well as help them to developed themselves. As far as type of game and total time for game is controlled, children are safe to be allowed to play games.
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| 2018-08-11 | PriteshAmrelia | 33 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...hysics rather than just wasting time. Similarly children can use puzzle games or quiz g...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...dren are get habituate to computer games,, it becomes a problem. Addition of compu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12626262626 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67496127346 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1155435471 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2727272727 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533631706649 0.243740707755 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193896843018 0.0831039109588 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122553709058 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355420905826 0.150359130593 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11673842752 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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