This topic raises the controversial issue whether that the valuable art such as a film, a a novel, a poem, or a song, most of people have to understand its clearly. Indisputably that art is very important in our life's and its impact varied from one to another. Hence, I totally disagree that the best measure of art success is the people understanding to it. However, this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples in conspicuous way.
To begin with, it is irrefutable that art is part of our life, at morning we listen to music, at noon may read a novel or at night may watch a film, and people point of views varies towards the art as a concept. On one hand, people opinions are very subjective it means what I see very great art work perhaps there is person may see the same work dull and without any meaningful meanings.
Further, the second vital point that should be taken into account, art do not use any language to convey the implicit ideas, thoughts, identities and feelings. Further illustration, art says things that words just cannot say. One striking example is the Mona Lisa painting everyone see this painting has different opinion, some of them see a smile face, in contrast some of them see a sad face. This, indicates the art success, that people understand and analysis the art in different mentalities.
Last but not least, art makes people think, feel and heal different situation in our life. To elaborate this point, require take a look at this quot " the purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls" . Consequently, it is pretty obvious that we can heal our soul's from any injury may by listening to music, feel things words cannot say or simply art makes us more well rounded and helps us to widen our horizon and discover things vague in our personalities. In sum, sometime it is hard on people to understand the art value but does not reflect the art is worthless.
All in all, due to aforementioned reasons and examples, people can understand art in varied ways and there is no right or wrong opinion, it is very subjective to them and people opinions do not mandatory reflect the art value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, well, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63541666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58852248247 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536458333333 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1448127613 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130898316345 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532917666119 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045242816907 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799533289186 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345305992054 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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