Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook ) have a huge negative impact on society.To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
Indeed, network sites are the biggest source of an amusement and the utmost significant role is played by these social networking sites in the life of people.Usually, it can be clearly seen that, how these sites are being used by people in an excessive amount for doing a recreational activities.In this modern era, people are getting used to social networking sites in their daily life.I partially agree with the given statement.Further,this essay will shed light on both the view points in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the networking sites have a huge positive impact due to its innovative features without any kinds of obstacles.Firstly,significant messages can be easily conveyed to each other and the video calling is very feasible in foreign countries.Secondly, the people get a chance to make a good concerns with new folks on these sites.Finally, strategies are easily expand by business person to share new posts in all over the country for telling to an another people about the specifications ,merits and demerits of particular work.
Every coin has two sides so same like this ,networking sites have also some negative impacts like; personal information of any ordinary person can be shared by anyone illegally on Facebook without any kind of fear.In fact ,the fake accounts are made of an enormous or businessman person by robbers on the behalf of personal information and details as well as some of the mischievous people mislead and play with the sentiments of their own mutual friends on Facebook.
In conclusion,I would like to say that everyone should understand the value of these social networking sites and they should be know about the characteristics of using social sites.In fact, the mentality should be changed by people for preventing a bad thoughts from their own mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15986394558 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33188396923 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.765507491 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 379.25 106.682146367 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 20.7667163134 354% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.25 7.06120827912 428% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20950468873 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121772756389 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337680021147 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121772756389 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337680021147 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 13.0946893788 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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