Dear Sir,
I am James, applied for a savings account in your bank last week. I have been asked to acknowledge about the new Visa Card from the envelop I have received yesterday. I am writing this letter to express my concern about the absence of the card inside the envelope.
For your better information, I have been assured to receive the card last Monday and suppose to use the new card associated to account from your branch. However, I have received it very later on Saturday and I assume the reason for the delayed delivery must be due to the strike of the postal department for the last three days. Anyways, I am more concerned about the secured delivery of the envelope which I suspect by the condition I have received it. I am not sure but, there might be a breach acted upon the envelope because it has been delivered with corners cut a little. The card missing in the envelop made me so curious to think that whether if it is sent erroneously without a card or is a possibility of the courier service to ravage it.
I am sure you can find the possible astray situation and I request to please stop my online account activities until this issue is resolved.
Hoping to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cknowledge about the new Visa Card from the envelop I have received yesterday. I am writing...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the envelop I have received yesterday. I am writing this letter to express my co...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...receive the card last Monday and suppose to use the new card associated to accoun...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elope which I suspect by the condition I have received it. I am not sure but, the...
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Line 5, column 602, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rners cut a little. The card missing in the envelop made me so curious to think that whethe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54260089686 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4723124443 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582959641256 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5918881663 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0909090909 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311307166312 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115237441185 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778682059993 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185482235309 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102788187807 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.