Fewer and Fewer people are choosing to become teachers. Why do young people not want to be teachers? How this could be changed.
Teachers are nation builders. These days choosing teaching as a profession is decreasing. Folks have explored a lot other options to be choose from. This essay will give reasons why pupil are not taking teaching as an option and steps which can change this scenario.
School, school days or teachings of school will remain with a person for lifetime. Those are the teachers without whom a person cannot read or write efficiently. Teachers play a vital role in an establishment of a child’s nature or personality. They are the path definers.
Nowadays, people are not opting teaching as a profession and there can be several reasons for that. First can be because for humans teaching is low profile job, in the sense they are getting education to that level that their minds are trained to choose engineering or accounting or finance as their career. Secondly, teaching has less money. Where a person can earn more in working with MNCs they will never choose a job which is giving less money. They learn new things in other jobs whereas in teaching one has to repeat same thing to different set of people. Productivity is less in teaching.
It is high time that all the myths regarding teaching should be burst out and people should understand the importance of being a teacher and feel proud in being one. Government has to give pay raise to the teachers, more facilities and future saving policies should be introduce in the favor of teachers. More awards and recognitions should be introduce for them. More seminars should be conducted on teaching profession. After all nobody can deny this fact that without teachers a person will never become literate or should be able to define good or bad.
- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss about both views and give you opinion. 74
- In many countries, the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What will be the effects of it on family and society? 56
- Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as cell phone) or a service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree. 73
- Some people think it is a good thing for a senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organization. To what extent do you agree? 78
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while other disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...re nation builders. These days choosing teaching as a profession is decreasing. Folks ha...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to engineer'.
Suggestion: to engineer
... that their minds are trained to choose engineering or accounting or finance as their caree...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'introduced'?
Suggestion: introduced
...es and future saving policies should be introduce in the favor of teachers. More awards a...
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Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'introduced'?
Suggestion: introduced
... More awards and recognitions should be introduce for them. More seminars should be condu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, after all, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86597938144 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58425641509 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.819084265 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5263157895 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218422859111 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649419890504 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058140767935 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123960923206 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741031176478 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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