in recent times, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do shopping. is this the positive development or negative?
It is irrefutable that large shopping malls are increased in recent times which lead to a break down the businesses of the small town shops. In my perspectives, this growth brought both benefits and drawbacks for the society.
Let us now throw some light on the positive impacts of the increasing number of people in the large shopping centers. There is no denying the fact that in these big plazas, people can select a product from the huge variety. Even though people can buy the products for the whole family and also assist them to get all the essential household goods under one roof. Apart from this, these shopping complexes provide the various discount offers on various occasions which attract people to do shopping.
Let us now elaborate the other opinion of negative development. No doubt, small shopkeepers have faced a tremendous loss owing to these big malls. However, people who buy borrowed goods from these shops and paid later gives more benefits to the shopkeepers because of the interests on the borrowed items. Apart from this, All these malls are situated in the suburbs of metropolitan cities and It is the uphill task for the lower community to approach these malls, so they prefer to choose to buy things from the local shops.
In an epilogue, large shopping complexes have assisted the public to save their wealth, time and energy. but, this development cannot affect the sales of small-town shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... to save their wealth, time and energy. but, this development cannot affect the sal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, apart from, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95850622407 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46267570176 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2679941958 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237711443779 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824729320649 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583388671583 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148833510554 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333904559025 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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