Some people link that children showed go to kindergarden before attending primary school,which others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families. Discuss both
It is irrefutable, nowadays many of the people are planing to put their children on kindergarden before they go to primary school. While others saying that is waste of money and they can spend all time with their parents. I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated before any conclusion can be drawn.
on the other hand, children who are all going to kindergarden and they are getting benifits for social interaction and who can learn social activities. One of the best part is learning activities with their peers which they can get the motivation from everyone. Another think is that thay can improve basic acadamic studies such as numbers,rhymes and alphabets which will give preparation for primary school. for instance, in India, there are 54% children are going to kindregarden and specially metropolitian cities which are taking the main leading part to increase the ratio.
on the one hand, there are many people are still in below poverty and who can not afford money to put their children to pre schools. Main reason is pre school also charging more money for academic which everyone can not plan it for this reason. Eventhough, parents can teach their basic academic lessons whatever they can get it from kindergarden and they can get parent attention.
To summarise after slicing and dicing this, parent can teach their children but they won't get it social interaction and peer activities in order to this kindergarden is right aproach for primary school preparations and adopt to the timings as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97276264591 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61512759488 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1822100295 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.181818182 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263361317653 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120235161 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724693270073 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183610031054 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550605573603 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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