Dear Kate,
How are you? Well, today I'm writing to suggest you a book which is a must read. To be honest , I always prefer reading non fiction stories; however this time I read An Old Man And The Sea written by renowned American author Mr. Earnest, and I must say that it is such a great book to read.
That being said, while I was reading, the only one who stroked my mind was just you. As I finished the story, I immediately wrote you a letter to share the delighted experience which I had from the story. It is because, I thought that you must go through this highly positive motivational story of an old man, owing to your love, curiosity and interest which lies in the friction novels.
Therefore, if you want, I'll either post it to your place or convert it in digital form and send it by email.
Moreover, I could also suggest you some book retailers who have a stock of this, and they have no problem to deliver it at your doorstep if you placed an online order.
I hope that you would surely enjoy the reading. Don't forget to write me that how much you love it's story?
Lots of love,
Jacob
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Kate, How are you? Well, today Im writing to s...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Dear Kate, How are you? Well, today Im writing to suggest you a book which is ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... book which is a must read. To be honest , I always prefer reading non fiction sto...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ways prefer reading non fiction stories; however this time I read An Old Man And ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by renowned American author Mr. Earnest, and I must say that it is such a great b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n old man, owing to your love, curiosity and interest which lies in the friction ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eliver it at your doorstep if you placed an online order. I hope that you woul...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...hat you would surely enjoy the reading. Dont forget to write me that how much you lo...
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Suggestion:
...uch you love its story? Lots of love, Jacob
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30952380952 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20996434569 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661904761905 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7116729518 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2727272727 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293639507666 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10445313958 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624872196185 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153382308071 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539546147268 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.