Dear SIR,
Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter to express my willingness to do a voluntary work in the renovation project of your school, which is going to be started by the end of September.
As a matter of fact, I am an Interior Designer, so I would be able to help you in designing the classes from inside.
Also, I have an in-depth knowledge of paints and their textures, which might help you in choosing the best colour for your school building in order to give it a an aesthetic look.
That being said, I have to go out of the town for one week to meet my client, so I will certainly be available next week, and I am helping you because I just want to improve the educational buildings in my area.
Therefore, if you would allow me, then I could also contact some other NGOs, and ask them to provide their assistance in renovating the school building.
I am looking forward to your favourable response. Hope you would permit me to be a part of this beautiful project.
Yours faithfully,
Maria Sen
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...our school building in order to give it a an aesthetic look. That being said,...
^
Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
...our school building in order to give it a an aesthetic look. That being said, I ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I will certainly be available next week, and I am helping you because I just want...
^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o be a part of this beautiful project. Yours faithfully, Maria Sen
^^^
Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...beautiful project. Yours faithfully, Maria Sen
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, therefore, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48677248677 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59798596766 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1006706375 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357743044608 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137771950541 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664745158733 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171333415545 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332509302815 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...our school building in order to give it a an aesthetic look. That being said,...
^
Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
...our school building in order to give it a an aesthetic look. That being said, I ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I will certainly be available next week, and I am helping you because I just want...
^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o be a part of this beautiful project. Yours faithfully, Maria Sen
^^^
Line 14, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...beautiful project. Yours faithfully, Maria Sen
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, therefore, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48677248677 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59798596766 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1006706375 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357743044608 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137771950541 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664745158733 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171333415545 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332509302815 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.