183. Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.
Film is one of the most important tools for gaining knowledge about a country. Certainly, watching a movie we can understand lots of important matters about a country or society, which are concealed in the background. All in all, there are diversity between different countries' movie making styles. In my point of view, paying attention to this style's characteristics is worthwhile. It seems to me that, watching films we can get valuable information about a countries culture, social issues and concerns, and also we can know their hobbies and intertainments.
The main important thing we can understand from a movie about a country is culture. Certainly, by watching the movies which are produced by different countries we can absorb important information about cultures. For Example, three years ago I knew nothing about the japenes culture, but after a while I got interested in their films.I remember on that time, I was saturated myself in japeness movies. After a period, I relized that, I had been able to know the culture of them unconsciously. For instance, now I know that, in their culture respect to people especially alder people, or trying to have a healthy diet is worthwhile. Therefore, I am concerned that, movies can exhibit the culture of a country to viewers.
Second matter which could be understood by watching a movie is the information about social issues of each country. Making a movie, directors are conveying their people's concerns. As an instance, all the people who have watched Indian movies believe Indians respect to love, or the value and plantyfulness of martial arts in china, and lots of examples which shows each country's social issues. Thus, I am positive that, movies are like a book in knowing a people in different countries.
Last but not least is getting familiar with each country's peoples' entertainments. Generally, each countries movie makers try to show their countries' people's entertainments, this way we can find where is suitible for what. For example, by watching films I know that the best place for gambling is Los Angles, or I know worlds best bars are in Hong Kong and ets. I am convinced that, just by watching movies I can get all information about hobbies in each country.
In my opinion, by watching films, we can get a variety of important information such as culture, concerns, and even entertainment's of people. Movies are like a newspaper which shows daily matters in each country.
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watching films we can get valuable information
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Sentence: It seems to me that, watching films we can get valuable information about a countries culture, social issues and concerns, and also we can know their hobbies and intertainments.
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Sentence: Generally, each countries movie makers try to show their countries' people's entertainments, this way we can find where is suitible for what.
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Sentence: In my opinion, by watching films, we can get a variety of important information such as culture, concerns, and even entertainment's of people.
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Sentence: It seems to me that, watching films we can get valuable information about a countries culture, social issues and concerns, and also we can know their hobbies and intertainments.
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Sentence: After a period, I relized that, I had been able to know the culture of them unconsciously.
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Sentence: Generally, each countries movie makers try to show their countries' people's entertainments, this way we can find where is suitible for what.
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