The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Elmi on Mon, 09/03/2018 - 18:22

The above maps illustrate the layout of the sports centre of a university and it's prospective vision on how it might seem to look like after it has been renovated. The maps compare the two images of before and after reconstructions.

To start with, it is shown in the first image that the university has approximately 25 meter pool, which is surrounded by a Changing Room, Gym, Seating area and a Reception at the entrance of the sports centre. It also has two outdoor courts on both west and east sides of the sports centre.

Furthermore, the forthcoming plan is to destroy the outdoor courts and replace them with more suitable facilities like, Leisure Pool, Changing Room and a Sports shop on the west side, and on the east side, there is going be a Sports Hall, two small Dance Studios, a Changing Room and a Café.

To sum up, the university sports centre will seem bigger then it is now, even though the Changing Room, Gym, Seating area and Reception that surrounded the mail pool will not be vandalised. The sports centre will have three Changing Rooms instead of one, two dance studios, the Gym is going be bigger, there will be a Café, a Sports shop as well as a Sports Hall. In addition to that, there is going to be two swimming pools, that is, the main pool and an even bigger Leisure Pool.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, look, so, then, well, in addition, as well as, to start with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54008438819 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46427951718 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489451476793 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.6129315436 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168049430213 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083037679113 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060792315602 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10667883452 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05624323768 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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