Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that individuals believe subjects like History is more important than Science and Technology, while others believe that Science and Technology to be of more importance. However, I believe that both History, Science and Technology are all important.
In this day and age, many people focus more on the future. Technology teaches us a lot about the future. Science guides us to make new discoveries on a daily basis. Similarly, History assist us to understand where we came from, which is necessary knowledge in order to move forward. Nowadays, the Technology we use is almost part of our daily lives, I know some of us cannot function without an internet connection, this is because, everything is easily accessible on the internet. According to some researchers, soon Robots are going to replace humans in few basic instances, for example, the chores we do, like cleaning and cooking.
Science is extremely essential, especially in the medical field where there are frequent new discoveries, ideas and cures for serious diseases are made, thus composing Science to be the most fulfilling field of all. Lastly, History tells us about our ancestors, our lives before Technology as well as how humans, plants, animals and other things on earth have been surviving until now.
To conclude, I believe our children should have the opportunity to learn as much as they can, weather it is History, Science, Technology, Art or Music, these are all equally important for our little ones to learn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, similarly, so, thus, well, while, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12820512821 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7281162293 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1790716209 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214472268055 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779897276357 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068972469555 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976478800849 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080424450759 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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