In view of the reading, the author enumerates possibility of establishing colonies of humans to live and work on the asteroids by pointing out 3 reasons of support. Finding the statements arguable, the lecturer casts doubt on the claim made by the article and count it weak. Then, presents a piece of evidence in contrary.
At first, the author argues that so low is the gravity on these small objects that can make the land safer than landing on the planet like Mars or Moon since there is no need to strong force to pull the spaceship on the surface of the asteroid. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that this is not the whole story. Not only can low gravity has obnoxious effect on creating low-density muscles but also it has effect on loss of bone density.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that these asteroids are usually rich in valuable metal like gold and platinum which have a scarce amount on the Earth. Considering their mining can help the colonist or the businesses sponsorship to provide their costs. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes this point by clarifying the fact that the cost of the sponsorship and also transporting this amount of material is too high and also the more increase the supply, the less market price can have.
Finally, the author asserts easy to arrive at the asteroids as the last point for supporting the more possibility of create colonies on them, in comparison to other near planets. The lecturer, though, dismisses it by elucidating that although it is easy to reach, it is or easy to return since their orbital sometimes settle near the Earth but it can change during the time and it could be possible to settle much farther away from the Earth when the colonist decides to return. Therefore, colonization on asteroids are not as much easy as it seems at first glance.
- TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task Like many creatures, humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes. How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling. In the case of humpback whales, we may have found the answer: the 80
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 71
- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task A little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a "burning mirror": a polished co 81
- TPO 50 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'businesses'' or 'business's'?
Suggestion: businesses'; business's
...eir mining can help the colonist or the businesses sponsorship to provide their costs. On ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, if, so, then, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 324.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72839506173 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52465362645 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2897597819 49.2860985944 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10813810651 0.272083759551 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394734981661 0.0996497079465 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478352387273 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676958604267 0.162205337803 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407265646107 0.0443174109184 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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