WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart represents the average precipitation while the line graphs show the temperatures over a period of a year in the city of Kolkata. Overall, it is clear from the graph that temperatures experienced downward trends and temperatures reach the highest in July. Meanwhile, the precipitation recorded to have biggest amount in July.
Firstly, the temperatures in Kolkata started at 20 degree celcius. This climbed gradually and reach a peak at 30 degree celcius in May. However, over the next following months the temperature fell steadily until October where it is continued with a sharp reduction to 20 degree celcius at the end of the period.
Precipitation in Kolkata begin around 30 mm in January. However, on June the precipitation skyrocketed to about 270 mm and reach a peak about 330 mm on July. This increased roughly ten times compared to the beginning of the period. On the rest of the year, precipitation reduced significantly in October and reached the lowest on December which is around 10 mm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the biggest'.
Suggestion: have the biggest
...eanwhile, the precipitation recorded to have biggest amount in July. Firstly, the temper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0650887574 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04307739251 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.405858928 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126743402267 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520065205319 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413523517514 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835765087685 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267256296922 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.