Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Employees at job interviews are expected to be asked various questions by their employers such as hobbies, interests and many other personal questions which include for example, the maitial status. but not all employees think that these type of information are relevant and useful for the job that they are applying for. This essay will discuss the different opinions employees have.
First off, managers like to discuss personal interests and hobbies to determine and have a better understanding of the employee's personality. This promotes the synergy between everyone within the business. Moreover, having knowledge of the individual's social status whether they are married or not help managers decide the best job position for them. Most companies require their staff members to travel around different branches for quality control checks and to provide annual reports. This can be rather difficult for most employees who can't afford to be distant from their families.
On the other hand, many others think that hobbies and other personal interests may be irrelevant. In addition, not everyone is comfortable with mixing work with their personal lives. Therefore, people would rather not to be asked such questions at their job interviews because they think it wastes their time and potential.
In conclusion, being asked about personal interests can help promote a healthy business relationship and set aside our differences for a professional workplace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...nclude for example, the maitial status. but not all employees think that these type...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
... and have a better understanding of the employees personality. This promotes the synergy ...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rather difficult for most employees who cant afford to be distant from their familie...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable mixing'.
Suggestion: comfortable mixing
...rrelevant. In addition, not everyone is comfortable with mixing work with their personal lives. Therefo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49557522124 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68867850258 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.865866201 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377337868694 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125971438846 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766236274586 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213677057938 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779111576576 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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