TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Humans are socialized creature and socializing is a part of our life. A person barely lives without any companion. As we talk about companionship our friend are one of the most important parts of our lives. The influence of friends is next to our parents. We learned life lessons from them, starting from the first step to school to the colleges and even our old ages.
Friendship is a feeling that bolsters with time. When someone became best friend it's the time that makes the bond stronger.
Friendship is a bond between two peoples and trust plays an important role. As we time spent together the trust grows, so we speak about our old friend the first thing that makes the bond stronger is time and trust that we earn by spending time in good or bad times. Old friends know me better than anyone and they understand my opinion. As an old friend know you better they are more able to give more relevance advice we need. Plus old friend, as you know them for many years they make you more comfortable.
When it comes to a new friend, new peoples add new spices to your life. New friends are someway and an interesting part to the life. We may gain new experiences with new friends. For me, I have many new friends now even but I still miss those good old memories of what I gain with my roommates even many years after graduation.
Many peoples may argue about the importance of old or new friends, I am against that idea. Both old and new friends are important as we can't make friends in one day. This is a paradoxical view if we don't spend time with our new friends how they become our good old memories. I meet many people in our life, with some of them we become a friend and only a few of them be a part of our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rson barely live without any companion. As we talk about companionship our friend ...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...p is a feeling that bolsters with time. When someone became best friend its the time...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...h time. When someone became best friend its the time that makes the bond stronger. ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... anyone and they understand my opinion. As an old friend know you better they are ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ates even many years after graduation. Many peoples may argue about the importa...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...old and new friends are important as we cant make friends in one day. This is a para...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e day. This is a paradoxical view if we dont spend time with our new friends how the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly a few of them be a part of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32515337423 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27358354356 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48773006135 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4689653077 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207242830232 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785168327138 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547582371574 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112767398646 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572011636023 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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