Modern communication system benefit many people yet there are some that appose to them.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , communication
In the modern era,communication system is mushrooming day by day while,...
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Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , few
...n system is mushrooming day by day while,few masses believe it is beneficial for eve...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , other
...es believe it is beneficial for everyone,other reluctant with this phenomenon and i co...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , and
...d i completely agree with this statement,and i intend to disscuss the both views in ...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ompletely agree with this statement,and i intend to disscuss the both views in th...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...coming paragraphs. The first step is understand why people says it is beneficial,there ...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , there
...erstand why people says it is beneficial,there are plothora of benefits. First and for...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , is
...plothora of benefits. First and foremost,is easily connect. In these days,people ar...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'connected'.
Suggestion: connected
... benefits. First and foremost,is easily connect. In these days,people are easily connec...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , people
...oremost,is easily connect. In these days,people are easily connect with everyone throug...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...gh the communication system. For example,in the past time people write a letter tha...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ommunication system. For example,in the past time people write a letter than send to peop...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...eople write a letter than send to people,and it is long process but nowadays,masses ...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , masses
...ople,and it is long process but nowadays,masses communicate easily and connect with eve...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , modern
...sily and connect with everyone. Moreover,modern system is good for everyperson due to ...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct with everyone. Moreover,modern system is good for everyperson due to it enhanc...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , and
...ryperson due to it enhance the knowledge,and it is so beneficial for children becous...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , it
...udy by communication system. Furthermore,it is more cheaper as compare to another s...
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Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...communication system. Furthermore,it is more cheaper as compare to another such as letter. ...
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Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... system. Furthermore,it is more cheaper as compare to another such as letter. H...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , other
...re to another such as letter. However,other people reluctant with this statement an...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , for
...nd they considered it is harmful firstly,for children becouse inthese days everyone ...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , if
... concentrate on their study. In addition,if people use it for longtime than it harm...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...n it harmful for their eyesight not only,but also masses become a lethargic day by d...
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Suggestion: , there
...ome a lethargic day by day. To sum up,there are so many options are considered mode...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d modern technology is good for everyone , their drawbacks cannot be overlooked,an...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...e , their drawbacks cannot be overlooked,and i discussed the reasons in the above pa...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...heir drawbacks cannot be overlooked,and i discussed the reasons in the above para...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5796460177 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39781537659 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570796460177 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6628128705 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12148903 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516083068152 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394649304004 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708046520263 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312061574064 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.