Life cycle of salmon
The provided diagrams indicate the life cycle of a large marine creature named the salmon.
It is clear that there are three main stages shown on the diagrams. This life cycle is from the movement of the small-size salmon to salmon’s reproduction after nearly 10 years.
At the first stage in these diagrams, after hatching from salmon eggs, the fry which has the length of 3-8 cm change their habitat from upper river to lower river. They usually live in that fast flowing area in a period of approximately 4 years. The life cycle continues with one more change in their living location when the fry grow up into smolt which reach the medium size of 12-15 cm. The smolt spend around 5 years on habitting in open sea area.
At the final stage, one thing which is extremely special and unique to this species happens. It is that adult salmon which develop completely with the longest length, 70-76 cm come back to the first location of their journey. In this slow moving area, it often takes them about 5-6 months to accomplish their reproductive mission by laying eggs in their ideal environment which consists of the reeds and many small stones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... the medium size of 12-15 cm. The smolt spend around 5 years on habitting in open sea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75742574257 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32011382141 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7814552164 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279823660033 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115494732469 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164492016628 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241465442441 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158275561839 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.