The picture below shows the life cycle of the salmon. Summarise the information
by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the life span of salmon fish.
Overall, it is evident that the process of maturation from eggs to adult salmon requires considerable time. The journey to adulthood is intricate involving various stages of development.
Examining the picture in more detail, it is clear that the salmon lays its egg in the upper river where the water moves slowly. The ovum is covered by small stones and reeds for 5 to 6 months. After this time, the eggs turn to fry which is 3-8 cm in length. Fry stay for 4 years in the lower river or estuary where water flows fastly. Here fry grow bigger and turn into smolt which is 12-15 cm in length. At this stage of smooth, it moves to the open sea and stays there for another 5 years. In the open sea, it develops into adult. Eventually, salmon attain its full size of 70-76 cm in length. After about 5 years, it moves to its birthplace upper river to lay eggs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45294117647 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27905310271 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.803892364 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0833333333 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.166666666667 5.23603664747 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0772180122771 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279997885936 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393550972043 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634066822729 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318381849952 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.2329268293 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.