Dear Perry,
I am writing this letter, expressing my apology for not being able to attend yesterday's team meeting. I understand that my presence was required, along with fellow team members and I failed to be there.
I intend to explain the reason for my absence. Last morning, when I was on my way to office for the meeting, there was a huge accident on the highway. upon approaching the scene, I noticed a young college student, badly wounded and fallen off his bike. I couldn't help but notice that nobody came forward to help this young fellow, so I decide to help this youth.
Firstly, I quickly notified the emergency services and requested for an ambulance. Secondly, with the help of a few good samaritans we helped the victim sit at the side and moved his bike out of the way. Luckily, there was a nurse who noticed that there was an accident and she came forward to offer her help.
Consequently, the ambulance arrived and he was taken to the hospital, where he would be treated for his wounds. Fortunately, the accident was not fatal.
I promise to compensate for the my absence by rescheduling the meeting next week at your convinient time.
Please accept my apology. Looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Jack Frost
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...am members and I failed to be there. I intend to explain the reason for my abs...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Upon
...ere was a huge accident on the highway. upon approaching the scene, I noticed a youn...
^^^^
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...adly wounded and fallen off his bike. I couldnt help but notice that nobody came forwar...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 29, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...t fatal. I promise to compensate for the my absence by rescheduling the meeting nex...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81651376147 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59694614539 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3165654847 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123398383341 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460699415354 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528791706527 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708638259432 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490468063063 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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