Due to advancement in technology and industrialisation, life has become hectic and complex and it can be further worsened if new generation people do not organize and plan their lives. Some people aver that planning is not important in today's busy life and they deal with the task on first in first out approach. In contrast, i believe, that the people should have a knack to orchestrate tasks and with such ability they can achieve the desired results.
To begin with, planning and organizing are the two main pillars of success. I concur that young people have agile mind and they have multitasking skills, however tasks not effectively planned could lead to mayhem in ones life. Today in various reputed institutes, time management and work management are being taught to equip students with these traits and once learned, the people should be encouraged to use these in their personal and professional life. On the other hand, i believe the experienced elder people very well plan and organize due to the fact that they know the importance of these abilities which young people are not aware of.
Furthermore, organizing and planning also help in reducing stress, it gives insight of various benevolent facets of these abilities. For instance, due to lack of planning in government offices, often people complain of missing files and inappropriate documents issued but lately computers have been installed in these offices for proper management. Young people should take advantage of inbuilt trait that current education system has taught them before their exposure to the real corporate world.
To recapitulate, i would recommend that one should rely on ones basic instincts of working, however the effective tools for planning and organizing would definitely improve the ones hold on life and future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19795221843 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7269218773 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58361774744 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5368182744 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306838198901 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114548099543 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608193378863 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17468639857 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614169624746 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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