Dear Maria,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of health. I am writing to let you know that I have moved to new apartment in Aditya Heights near to Hafeezpet.
Actually, I was searching for a new house from quite a while now but failed to find any good house with ample sunlight and ventilation. Fortunately, one of my friend got transferred to Bangalore and he had vacated his apartment and asked me to move in. As you are aware, my daughter is allergic to damp weather therefore I was looking for a nice and cozy flat and this flat suit my requirements. My new house is east facing corner flat in a gated community with all the amenities like gym, swimming pool, power backup and kids play area. The flat is neat and tidy with fresh woodwork done just an year ago with wooden flooring as well. It has modular kitchen with utility area and most attractive feature is the balcony with a sunset view in the evening.
I would like to invite you for a dinner on saturday, if you are busy on weekend please let me the suitable time so that we can meet over tea or coffee.
Thank you
Mohit Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... and tidy with fresh woodwork done just an year ago with wooden flooring as well. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36231884058 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35425849925 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676328502415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0793907514 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188186400623 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724291227235 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521458936019 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137311476142 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704728689665 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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