With increase in the paying capacity, tourism industry is enjoying the boom which they lack in last few decades. Due to extravagant nature of current generation and increase in tourist destinations, manifold increase in number of family tours has been observed. I believe, this is a positive development for local people and negative development for environment due to the factors described in following paragraphs.
Firstly, with myriads of destinations have come into the picture which offers perfect family gateway due to their attractive features, to name a few, tranquil beaches, local cuisine, and adventure sports. Due to bustling life, people often tend to explore new destinations which can offer them stress-free life and detach them from daily routine. With increase in tourism, comes positive development such as improvement in nation's economy, people well being and income sources. Further, tourism can help remote areas to be proper connected with rest of the world, with infrastructure development and resource generation.
Though tourism is beneficial for people, however, it has detrimental effects on the environment. It can lead to depletion of various resources which are meant for local people and further have burdening effect on environment to generate these resources. For example, recent identified locations such as Seychelles and Maldives offer a perfect destination but owing to excessive tourism, their air and water get polluted causing problem for natives.
To summarize, increase in tourism is beneficial for people however, people visiting these destination should not harm the nature and should help each other to maintain serenity and tranquility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this destination' or 'these destinations'?
Suggestion: this destination; these destinations
...ial for people however, people visiting these destination should not harm the nature and should h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63529411765 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90622368401 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5047993913 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279479629888 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106511196639 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941729143223 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173425832897 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742544612857 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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