Hi Anand,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you that i am looking for a job change and i have received a mail from recruitment site for a current opening in your company i.e. Sun Pharma Laboratories. The company is looking for a regulatory affairs manager for their oncology portfolio based at New Delhi.
As you are already aware that i am looking for a job change for quite a while now and want to relocate to my hometown therefore this job is very important for me. I have forwarded my resume to the recruitment agency, but mailed me saying that they require any internal reference to send my resume to the company. The reference will place my application on the top and increase my chances of getting a interview call. Further, you have been associated with the company from last 10 years and as i know you have done well, so it would be really helpful if you can support my application. Request you to send me your business card to attach with my application.
Hope to meet to you soon.
Thanks
Mohit Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing well. I am writing to tell you that i am looking for a job change and i have ...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Delhi. As you are already aware that i am looking for a job change for quite a...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... top and increase my chances of getting a interview call. Further, you have been ...
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Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h the company from last 10 years and as i know you have done well, so it would be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49735449735 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57114549795 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9538609585 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24773462402 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904560148511 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682828854378 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155869305401 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567000423498 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.