An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shop online.
Due to proliferation of the internet, online shopping industry is booming nowadays. The growth is primarily due to increased involvement of many multinational companies in online trading and availability of huge discounts on items. In this essay I will discuss various advantages and disadvantages of online shopping for a manufacturer and customer.
Firstly, there are plethora of advantages to customer that includes convenience, competitive prices and access to global brands. Nowadays, people are busy in their professional life to such an extent that they don't have time to visit various stores for shopping, hence online shopping is convenient and one can shop online while doing daily chores. Secondly, with global brands coming into picture and with increased competition, the effect can be seen on the prices of goods. Customer can now compare and choose the product that offers good value for money. Online trading is advantageous to the companies as they offer companies a global pool of the customers and considerably lesser investment. Companies trading online don't require infrastructure development such as showrooms and man force, with decreased investment, product is sold at comparatively low price and the company can clear the stock in few months. For instance, flipkart has sold goods worth 10 billion in big billion sale in just two days and the company cleared the stagnant stock worth 2.8 billion.
On the other side, online trading do have some disadvantages to customers and companies. Firstly, the customer cannot check the quality and material of the product before ordering and it often happens that the product displayed on the site differs from the actual product delivered. Further, some companies do not have proper grievance redressal facility that ends up customers losing their money. For companies, the major disadvantage is loss of the goods, for instance, recently lot of complaints have been observed wherein customers receive stones or other items instead of the item ordered. In today's news one person has posted a video of receiving stones in an apple phone box.
To recapitulate, online trading have advantages and disadvantages to both customer and companies, however, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. With such a rapid increase in customers opting for online shopping, the future of companies trading online is promising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92362762038 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549865229111 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8617677628 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.588235294 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173173026318 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621733048886 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426250688585 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117291091438 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315755678554 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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