Hi Anand,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you that i am looking for a job change and i have received a mail from recruitment site for a current opening in your company i.e. Sun Pharma Laboratories. The company is looking for a regulatory affairs manager for their oncology portfolio.
As you are already aware that i am looking for a job change for quite a while now and want to relocate to my hometown therefore this job is very important for me. I forwarded my resume to the recruitment agency, but they have mailed me saying that they require any internal reference to send my resume to the company. The reference will place my application on the top and increase my chances of getting a interview call. Request you to send me your business card to attach with my application.
Hope to meet to you soon.
Thanks
Mohit Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing well. I am writing to tell you that i am looking for a job change and i have ...
^
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...olio. As you are already aware that i am looking for a job change for quite a...
^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... top and increase my chances of getting a interview call. Request you to send me ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6210610843 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9699942682 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234825528112 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878165519241 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708851073001 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14811662092 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534808633324 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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