Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Give your opinion and relative examples from your own experiences.
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. This is a debatable topic. Each side has its own logical arguments.
On one side, the most conspicuous aspect of sports professionals earning a great deal more money is that they have to do strenuous workout. They cannot live a sluggish life or rest for sometime as they have to attain the highest targets for themselves and their mother land. They don't have time to do an extra job and fulfill the needs of their families. Their job of being a sports professional requires full focus and concentration. Which is possible only if all of their necessary requirements are fulfilled within their job. From this point of view, the more money they earn is fully justified. For example, my uncle is a cricketer. Most of the times he is out of country playing different tournaments. Even at the most important events in family he is absent because of his professional responsibilities. As this job is paying him enough money, he has no financial worries. His full focus is on how to improve his performance day by day and become a price for his country.
On the other hand, the most preponderant facet of other professionals earning less is that sometime the sports professionals are over-valued. It has become the need of the hour to cast sports professionals in ads to increase the ratings. This is not good for professional actors. The high media attention and being a public star is not only damaging the other professionals but the sportsmen also. Other professional are often not paid according to their hard work. For example, my friend is a model. She has to go for shootings irrespective of whether it is day or night. Her routine is very hectic. Because of less pay she has also to do a part time job. This thing is a setback for her natural talent of modeling.
In a nutshell, there should be an equilibrium between the pays of sportsmen and other other professionals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
... themselves and their mother land. They dont have time to do an extra job and fulfil...
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Suggestion: as well
...e other professionals but the sportsmen also. Other professional are often not paid ...
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Suggestion: part-time
...ecause of less pay she has also to do a part time job. This thing is a setback for her na...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: other
...brium between the pays of sportsmen and other other professionals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78711484594 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91730475129 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1639285044 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7307692308 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7307692308 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42307692308 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312610716669 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865365686921 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138505933058 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249483858006 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.231666338727 0.056905535591 407% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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