The diagram below shows how potato chips are made.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
On the diagram is shown a process of making a potato cheeps.
Firstly, a workers check the potato quality. After this, potatoes get into washer. Then potatoes are rinsed by cold water. After rinsing, potatoes are given in a peeler machine. By this stage, potatoes are peeled and a starch are removed. Following that potatoes by the bucket conveyor are got to slicer machine and are sliced into a slice. On next phase, sliced potatoes are went by the flat bedtime later to the deep fryer, in which it sliced potatoes on the Flat Belt Conveyor. After all these procedures fried sliced salted potatoes come to a 2 types of packing, tp the bag packer and bulk can filler, in which they are packed. Finally, we get a known potato chips.
Thus, potato chips are came a several stages before they come to us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a worker' or simply 'workers'?
Suggestion: a worker; workers
...s of making a potato cheeps. Firstly, a workers check the potato quality. After this, p...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...n potato chips. Thus, potato chips are came a several stages before they come to us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, then, thus, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20409271388 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.570103611 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0909090909 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120166411438 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569017785473 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033907494853 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105991139106 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369694759979 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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