TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Now a days, Automobiles are the main source of transportation, which people commonly use for the routine because it is seen very convenient to the passenger. I think, if I have an to choose an option to select cars, so I will always ready for this. So this is mean, I completely disagree with the above statement. In fact, I can give many reasons for holding this opinion as well. These are: traffic increasing day by day, new models of car have been taken out since many years and also it is becoming habit for the people too.

To begin with my first reason, I am living in a country, where there is a wide roads and properly maintain roads but still there is always a huge amount of traffic because of many people use their personal convince rather than a public transport, for example bus and rickshaws. Thus, just conclude this, cars will never be replaces by the human beings.

Furthermore, towards my second reason, many of the companies take advantage and they are just making a new bundle of car models and throw it on stock markets and in the car fields. They are simply trying to get more business in this field, so how can you say that "cars will be lesser ", no no!.

Next, in the last, habits sometimes very hard to digest, it is not easy to say that leave your car or convenient way of travelling and go with the normal people, as they are use a local transportation. If I talk about my self, so yes I am super habitual to these kind of habits including car travelling. I even can not imagine my life with car. Also a lot of people doing the same thing like I am use to. It kills me when I just read this stupid question, because habit can not be change easily.

To conclude my view, basically, as I am quoting here, "cars never be fewer in numbers; indeed, it will increase their counting in coming 20 years.

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...ase their counting in coming 20 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, thus, well, for example, i think, in fact, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41812865497 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45623259365 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3494096916 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185050611959 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625687834163 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301871307825 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102939934272 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149866283001 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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