These days transportation system is being as basic needs for most of us. Due to increasing the number of people in our globe and maximization of out territory, we tend to use it in everyday activity. Among all transportation system car holds the first place in number. These number is drastically changing specially these recent century. I believe in the next two century the number of cars will increase due to different reasons, which i will explore in these essay.
First of all, our population growth in the fastest rate as compered to last centuries, in the same way the usage of cares were increasing. So as, we are in larging in number the number of cares will be incerase. For instance here in Ethiopia, our population is estimated to be doubled in next five years, there for its hard to say the number of cars will be deacresd in this setuation.
In addition of growing population, there are a vast technology advancment to motivate us to use them. These modification are being easy to use and some lexury acceries so
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days transportation system is being as basic...
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Line 1, column 438, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ncrease due to different reasons, which i will explore in these essay. First of ...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...will be deacresd in this setuation. In addition of growing population, there are a vast...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this modification' or 'These modifications'?
Suggestion: This modification; These modifications
... advancment to motivate us to use them. These modification are being easy to use and some lexury a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for instance, in addition, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 407.700716846 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68508287293 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78159101195 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.928401022 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110895809257 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047102024961 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285202030099 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804046262065 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00863059431238 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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