The following argument was made in a newspaper editorial:
“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument states the strength of national borders as the sole reason for the rise or the fall of the autonomy of a country. This actually translates to how porous the national borders are and illegal immigrants who might trickle in. in case of relatively porous national borders are a cause of national threat to both the economy as well as the identity of a country. The argument is hugely flawed as there has been various assumptions which was considered which making such a claim.
Firstly, the autonomy of a country is defined as the right of any country to self rule without the influences of any external country. Illegal immigrants if any should be too small a concern for any country in terms of a threat to national identity and economy. True apparently it might seem the increased population would require increased amount of spending in medical facilities, increased accomodation expenses and also employment all of twhich has to be borne of by the state. But in the long run, it is a win win situation for both the immigrants as well as the country in overall.
Immigrants who have illegally trickled in can be utilised in the labour intensive works in the country as well as employed in various skills across various industries int the country. The increased cheap labour would help the country lessen its dependence on immigrant labour from other countries. This would do a whole lot of good to the economy as it would cost a lot less to the national exchequer.
In addition to it, these illegal immigrants on receiving proper training can go on to be popular and famous extrepreneurs and form huge business empires which can in trun generate huge amout of wealth and jobs for the citizens of the country. They can also be holding top positions of the already famous companies and institutions of the country and help it attain international recognition and status with their talent and hard work.
Illegal immigrants if nurtured properly can also be nurtured to be great sportspersons and with facilites and training, they can bring laurels to the country in various national and international sporting events across the world liek the world championships and the olympics. They can mould into great research fellows and make their fellow country men proud by making ground breaking discoveries. In such scenarios the national identity would be further enchanced in the global stage and thus it would be wrong to wrong to assume that the illegal immigrants would be a cause for worry in terms of national identity.
The entire argument is being too focussed on driving out the illegal immigrants but we tend to forget that they can be integrated into the social fabric of a country in a bit more humane manner and instead of being threats they might as well be jewels for the country as well as inspirational models for the generations to come. Hence we need to deal with them with care , lest they feel unwanted and oustracized and turn themselves to be social evils. The opportunities are endless and instead of focussing on efforts to drive the illegal immigrants back home, the countries and their administration should be optimistic in their approach.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: True apparently it might seem the increased population would require increased amount of spending in medical facilities, increased accomodation expenses and also employment all of twhich has to be borne of by the state.
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation
Error: twhich Suggestion: which
Sentence: Immigrants who have illegally trickled in can be utilised in the labour intensive works in the country as well as employed in various skills across various industries int the country.
Error: utilised Suggestion: utilized
Error: int Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In addition to it, these illegal immigrants on receiving proper training can go on to be popular and famous extrepreneurs and form huge business empires which can in trun generate huge amout of wealth and jobs for the citizens of the country.
Error: trun Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: extrepreneurs Suggestion: entrepreneurs
Error: amout Suggestion: amount
Sentence: Illegal immigrants if nurtured properly can also be nurtured to be great sportspersons and with facilites and training, they can bring laurels to the country in various national and international sporting events across the world liek the world championships and the olympics.
Error: olympics Suggestion: limits
Error: facilites Suggestion: facilities
Error: sportspersons Suggestion: sports persons
Error: liek Suggestion: like
Sentence: In such scenarios the national identity would be further enchanced in the global stage and thus it would be wrong to wrong to assume that the illegal immigrants would be a cause for worry in terms of national identity.
Error: enchanced Suggestion: enhanced
Sentence: Hence we need to deal with them with care , lest they feel unwanted and oustracized and turn themselves to be social evils.
Error: oustracized Suggestion: outraged
Sentence: The opportunities are endless and instead of focussing on efforts to drive the illegal immigrants back home, the countries and their administration should be optimistic in their approach.
Error: focussing Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 540 350
No. of Characters: 2603 1500
No. of Different Words: 245 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.821 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.82 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.706 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 193 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 151 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 97 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.949 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.608 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... how porous the national borders are and illegal immigrants who might trickle in....
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Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... of national threat to both the economy as well as the identity of a country. The argumen...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: win
...the state. But in the long run, it is a win win situation for both the immigrants as we...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...n win situation for both the immigrants as well as the country in overall. Immigrants ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industries'' or 'industry's'?
Suggestion: industries'; industry's
...ployed in various skills across various industries int the country. The increased cheap la...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...r from other countries. This would do a whole lot of good to the economy as it would cost...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attains'?
Suggestion: attains
...institutions of the country and help it attain international recognition and status wi...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 507, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'wrong to'.
Suggestion: wrong to
...n the global stage and thus it would be wrong to wrong to assume that the illegal immigrants woul...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 330, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...nal models for the generations to come. Hence we need to deal with them with care , l...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ence we need to deal with them with care , lest they feel unwanted and oustracized...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 11.1786427146 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 55.5748502994 135% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2649.0 2260.96107784 117% => OK
No of words: 540.0 441.139720559 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90555555556 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74462118064 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 204.123752495 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457407407407 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 817.2 705.55239521 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3452484297 57.8364921388 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.421052632 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4210526316 23.324526521 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.70786347227 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294982595039 0.218282227539 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992416809853 0.0743258471296 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537918040045 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158783437806 0.128457276422 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037775613113 0.0628817314937 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.3799401198 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 98.500998004 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.