A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions, old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
People nowadays seems to view other person’s social status and material possessions as the main indicators that they use to judge others while moral values seems to be irrelevant to a person’s worth. People does not think these values as important while a person’s status in society and their riches are growing more relevant throughout the years. These 2 views will be discussed in more details.
According to my opinion, social status and material possessions are important and commonly people strives to have a high social status and become rich in their life. People view them as the main indicators of someone’s worth are due to both of them are most person’s goal in life. If a man has achieved their goal in life, most people will look up to him and judge him by it.
To the contrary, judging a person by their moral values is less popular because it is harder to do. Anyone could pretend to be a good person so that people view them highly while in reality, they have a bad attitude. Furthermore, people usually does not care about morals as long as they are rich. People would prefer having riches than morals and hence why they judge a person by their possessions.
I disagree with judging a person solely by their status and riches. Moral value of a person is more important because it would contribute to the society better. If a morally good person is in charge of a government, it could lead the society into a better future. To the contrary, a person should not be judged by their riches because it depends on how they obtain those riches either in a good or a bad way. In conclusion, judging others by their morale is more crucial than judging them by their status and riches.
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- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions, old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ssions as the main indicators that they use to judge others while moral values seem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71617161716 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58581226661 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452145214521 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3779408073 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206704951228 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822606865808 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736741383083 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140719116845 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527591104375 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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