Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
It is an indubitable fact that social media platforms have secured a top-notch position all over the globe. It has now become the most pivotal aspect among the people of different ages. On the flip side, some opines that sharing personal data on these platforms may lead to detrimental effects. In my opinion, I believe that it has more prons if we compare to its cons.
Firstly, It has become the vital source of connectivity all over the globe. Folks living in the different corners of the world can talk and can be in touch with each other. Moreover, it had also helped to boost the global economy and the relationships between various countries. For instance, many platforms such as Tweeter, Pinterest, LinkedIn and many more had supported various multinational and local companies to get connected and boom their business.
Secondly, it has become convenient for all juveniles to make new friends and social groups from anywhere. Ergo, this had removed the cultural and social differences among the nations and the planet has become a family. To add more, important data, business files, personal documents, photos, videos, audios files and many more can be transfer effectively on just one click which had mitigated the cost of courier. To illustrate, instant messages, photos, videos, files and more can be sent to one's friend or relative within seconds.
Thirdly, online chatting platforms had made a rapid growth in media industries. People can get the news or any new updates in their social media accounts quickly. Furthermore, adolescents and old people are also becoming influenced by this digital world and thus, they started learning and adapting to this platforms which had ultimately make their life easier.
On the other hand, 'As every Graden has Weeds', these digital platforms have also some disadvantages. It is more addictive and has created many issues related to the explosion of personal information. Hackers tend to hack the accounts and misuse the personal data which had affected the lives of many people. Business suffered a lot due to this scenario as their data were sold and were misused by some rivals. Crimes related to kidnap has raised as innocent toddlers make the post of their location and every activity which had helped the criminals to act more efficiently.
To sum up, I would like to reiterate that social media platforms outweigh its advantages. Though it has few drawbacks but it can be solved by taking effective measures and by making the platforms more secure by two-factor authentication login and sign-up systems. Companies itself can focus on securing their platforms to alleviate this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., videos, files and more can be sent to ones friend or relative within seconds. T...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
..., they started learning and adapting to this platforms which had ultimately make the...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
... to this platforms which had ultimately make their life easier. On the other hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11264367816 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64925349133 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549425287356 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9842271514 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6956521739 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.60869565217 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149770152077 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502391371869 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675464563441 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863306237552 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500267381447 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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