You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Pankti,
Hope you are doing great with your health and spirit!
I am very much excited to share a wonderful news with you that I got an admission in one of the prestigious University which is situated in your hometown. I will be there for my further academic course which will last for 2 years that is Masters in Information Technology.
However, along with the further studies, I would also like to have some proficiency in my professional skills. I am oblivious about the culture, work environment and living standards over there so, it will great if you can guide me through the processes and help me to find a part-time job for me.
Furthermore, this will also help me to earn some money while studying as I would be immigrating to the newer place and I will be liable for my all expenses. I want you to search a part-time job for me over there so that I can work along with my studies. You would have many references and you can approach your friends, relative or colleagues for the same.
As you know that there are plethora of reasons behind my approach towards job while studying, it will great if I can have small help from your for my Job search. In addition, I will have a stay at your home for few days until I finalize my accommodation place over there. I hope this sounds good to you.
Awaiting to see you soon,
Thanks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'wonderful news'.
Suggestion: wonderful news
...rit! I am very much excited to share a wonderful news with you that I got an admission in one...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
... can guide me through the processes and help me to find a part-time job for me. Furthermore,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49397590361 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55048855221 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.76944867 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347362126276 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150521062572 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082719729386 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210426965311 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619553559738 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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