You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
tell him which team won
describe the conditions on the day
say how you felt about the match
Dear Jack,
How are you? Hope you are feeling well!
I just thought to write you regarding the match held recently, so that being hospitalised you can feel the real scenario. Last week, we had a tournament on St. Camp Stadium and were playing against the strongest team ‘Star Rivals’, and had amazing match together.
Initially, we had started with the toss, they won it and the match beings. Both the teams played well and the competition was too tough. Both the team was on the peak and have same cut-to-cut scores. At last, we were only left with one goal to have our trophy, but unfortunately sam just fall down and they snatched ball from our team and made the final goal. It was just unexpected moment and the crowd cheering us stuck for the moment. They won, but not an issue we have few more tournaments to go with, we can do it well.
Moreover, the actual reason behind the failure was unconditional weather, the atmosphere was too humid and the entire field was sleepy, at the end hardly any grass was visible and the are was covered with mud.
I felt very bad as we lost our match at the last moment. Along with me, entire team missed you more as you are the lucky gem of our team. If you would be there we would be more delighted and would have won the match. Anyways, we hope you will get well soon and we guys can play together for our next tournament.
Get well soon!
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ardly any grass was visible and the are was covered with mud. I felt very bad a...
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Line 11, column 101, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ng with me, entire team missed you more as you are the lucky gem of our team. If ...
^^
Line 11, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tire team missed you more as you are the lucky gem of our team. If you would be t...
^^
Line 11, column 266, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'guy'
Suggestion: guy
..., we hope you will get well soon and we guys can play together for our next tourname...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50763358779 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3046514557 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1401623477 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7333333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257136940306 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930087709181 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619528686232 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154879634096 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733262718415 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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