You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,
state your reason for writing
describe the problems and explain how you feel
propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
Dear Sir,
I am your one of the tenant holder at “Star Centre Square” pursuing English Language Studies - Brigton, and I am writing to you so that you can personally get into this matter and can fix the problem effectively. Me and my peers are suffering a water problem at our accommodation since few weeks.
Moreover, I had tried to contact the Service Provider of the flat three to four times but they did not felt it to be their obligation. They even send one plumber to fix the problem but he again left the premises by saying that it is not a tubing issue but its a burner issue. Therefore, I immediately thought to write you so that you can arrange something for us on urgent basis.
Furthermore, whenever we go for shower, hot water starts pouring into tub but within a minute it turns to extra cold water and never flows out hot again from the tap. To add more, its a mid of winter season so it is becoming perilous day by day.
However, you can approach someone from Gas Agency to look after this issue or can assign another Service Provider at our place. It is your onus to resolve this circumstance. I would like to request you to even provide us 20% discount for the rent of this month as we had almost finished the month with this problem.
Waiting for your positive response,
Thanks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...aying that it is not a tubing issue but its a burner issue. Therefore, I immediatel...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ut hot again from the tap. To add more, its a mid of winter season so it is becomin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53112033195 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48126646829 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630705394191 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5223289785 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2727272727 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227372557102 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727765134999 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492657745175 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110557918183 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570932422935 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.