You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
say what the problem is
describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Sir,
I am abc, enrolled for the 1st semester course at Wilton University- ID303 by your Agency. I recently got an email stating accommodation details regarding my stay over the foreign country during my course.
Unfortunately, I came to know that I have been placed to the pain guest, to have a stay over there for the entire course will be such a mortifying situation for me. Moreover, there are plethora reasons, the place is so congested with lack of ventilation amenities. Only one single bed and a study table is alloted, there is no wardrobe to place my accessories, clothes and cosmetics. Furthermore, it is far away from my campus.
To be very frank, I have assumed that I would get a non-shareable place with plenty of space and good ambiance. To add more, it will have all the resources which can be required to fulfill all basic necessities. It should be near to my college so that it can mitigate my transport expenses.
I would request you to look after this matter personally. Along with that, I would like you to approach them to change my accommodation amenities over there on the basis of my desires.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Thanks
xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...es which can be required to fulfill all basic necessities. It should be near to my college so tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77403846154 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79934464409 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.732077369 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.75 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900418648161 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308811600955 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309621578855 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513177554167 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284067401156 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.