Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good health.I am writing this letter to brief you about last weekend's cricket match which you unfortunately could not play.
It was raining 'cats and dogs' since saturday night.Both the teams were unsure weather we could play on Sunday.To our surprise,it turned out to be a sunny day.Hence,the match commenced at 12:30 pm.
It started with a toss between captain of both the teams(yellow and red).The opponent(yellow) team won the toss.They decided to bat first with Charlie n Harry taking the lead.Their team played fantastically and ended with a score of one hundred and fifty runs.
Then came red teams turn.To your dissapointment,we lost the match by forty runs.I played in the second half and was out at thirty runs.
I was very disheartened by the score.Your absence was felt badly.I really missed you as you really cheer me up.Infact,we also missed your high spirits.
Have a speedy recovery!
Kind regards,
Nick
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, really, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09316770186 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8125743435 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.732919254658 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5542200714 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 76.5299724578 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32993813346 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132484680927 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900057941515 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134543047572 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938219481315 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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