In recent time, many countries spend their valuable resources to discover more about space. Space exploration is very important matter for every nation though politician has not give more attention as it requires a huge amount of money. I believe that government should spend more money in developing nation rather than space exploration.
As we know, space research needs special kind of equipment and most importantly it necessarily wants spaceship, which costs half amount of the project itself. For space research project, they have to train their astronaut properly and even special kind of fuel in huge volume for successful mission.
Instead of wasting money on space research, politician have to invest that money in developing their nation. Developing countries such as India, which has more issues because of less facilities, have to put more focus on developing infrastructure by investing more money rather than wasting in space exploration programme. By this action, government would improve in education system, medical facilities and create more employment which lead the nation towards more development.
In conclusion, space research is useful only for developed countries such as, America, Russia and if country which is still developing invest in it, is totally wastage for their nations. They should invest money to boost their economy first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
... every nation though politician has not give more attention as it requires a huge am...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...India, which has more issues because of less facilities, have to put more focus on d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50236966825 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69642841073 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592417061611 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8352539861 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241421940544 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116393124882 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717417247099 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15458248749 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431203810445 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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