Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Art play crucial role in human life for further development and it is counted in significant part of all culture in all over the world. In such a scenario, today the topic argument that, art is important subject for children or it is wastage of time? Now, I am going to examine both points of view and shape up my opinion by end.
On the one side argument, there are group of people believe that, art is an essential subject for children, but, how it is beneficial for them? There are number of answers related to this statement. First of all, art is an single subject, which is also a good source of entertain to us and mostly the students easily create their interest in art. Moreover, due to art subject, they will diminish their stress after having serious classes, such as; physics, chemistry and mathematics etc. Undoubtedly, this subject will create more fun classes as well as it is good way to express our feelings and emotions through painting and drawing. Besides, the authority should involve this subject into a school curriculum.
On the other side, opponents of art subject point out that, art subject is totally wastage of time. It will be better, if pupils focus on other subjects like as; science and related to technology subjects. Infact, art is not only one of a mandatory subject included in national examination compared to other subjects. Furthermore, mostly the people think that future is not secure in the art sector. So that, they mostly focus on other compulsory subjects and it is noticeable that art is an additional subject for students.
To sum up, I believe that art is notable school subject in terms of bolster student creativity and provide a pleasant atmosphere in the class. In contrast, some people frequently thought that art subject is wastage time.
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Suggestion: groups
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Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8284789644 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58282030244 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5491513203 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.25 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345037941917 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114779159644 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764610192849 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203803855009 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442950083301 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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